All Comments on 'First Time Being Shared!'

It was a lot of fun helping you develop this story... so glad you reached out! :)

Wow what a debut story, so hot to read.

Will be looking forward to more from you :D

He asked for it, didn't like what he got. That is the risk. These things CAN work, but it takes a lot of conversation and soul searching before it happens

Nothing about this is group sex, not even in the tags, it feels like this should be in the exhibitionist and voyeur section or fetish section

Thank you LucieLou007! I’ll be sure to read through some of your work! The titles look very appealing!

Fabulous - lovely introduction, good development and perfect conclusion. All totally believable. Look forward to motor. Thans

Nat, for your first story honey, I think you did a fabulous job! Had you not told us at the beginning, I'd have never known this was your very first one unless I'd checked out you biography first, which I sometimes do. You kept my attention very well and I could only laugh as your BF James got to the point he couldn't watch. He had made his own bed, so to speak but he definitely couldn't lie in it. You did nothing wrong, obviously but simply enjoy the pleasure a much larger cock brought you, and I hope you left him that day! Definitely 5 stars babe, and I can't wait for more!!

You're a very capable writer, keep going! Nicely done, James got exactly what he THOUGHT he wanted, unfortunately what he thought and expected was somewhat less than Craig was very capable of delivering. If she parts with James, which I'm sure she will, I'm quite sure to who she could turn.

Quite nice - well done!

Thanks for the feedback so far everyone and I take your point mndhanson017, I struggled to decide on a category and can understand you not agreeing with it. A fair comment and not posted anonymously, unlike the person with the negative comment that offers nothing constructive and hides behind anonymity!

Hahaha, you could have called this "Backfired!" James got what he deserved! 5* from me! It's hard to feel sorry for him!

Great story , I would love to read more

Very well done - all lawyers know to not ask the question if you don’t already know the answer. Surprise! Gotta say I loved this story .. nicely paced. First submission? Really? Just gotta laugh. You have a very bright future!

Nat...excellent work there hun... worth waiting for...read the original right after this updated version and most definitely can see the improvement...this definitely a well put together story... hope there's more stories coming this way in the future.

Very hot story, and for your first, it is the best first story I have read. I don't come here often but when I searched for a cuckold story this was the first one to cum up. I'm very happy it was as it was a very enjoyable read.

Well done Nat

Loved it. Reminded me of watching mates fuck my nymphomaniacal wife. But unlike James, it turned me on watching them plow the moaning whore with their gargantuan thunder rods.

Wow. She says she loved him and didn’t want to hurt him. And yet, it didn’t take her long before using her words to humiliate and demean him. I know she felt used but she definitely enjoyed herself so she can’t really take the high road. She took the initiative. I liked the story. An interesting choice to make the most sympathetic character Craig.

Loved it - "comes under "be careful what you wish for..." Looking forward to your next story

FANTASTC Story Nat XXOO

Let bed the story hope to see more from you

This is first story? cannot wait to see what else you have in you - brilliant! 5 stars

Hi Nat, I keep coming back to this story because of how hot and well-written it is! I would really love to read a continuation of the story where the boyfriend accepts it and begins to join in!

Great story, well written and looking forward to the next one

well written. James, be careful what you wish for! And Craig, kudos to you for staking your claim.

Well-written! Even pacing and an even level of detail,which is SERIOUSLY difficult to accomplish.

Sorry it didn't have a happy ending IRL but wasn't committing it to "paper" cathartic?

Loved it. More please!