All Comments on 'The Substitute Coach'

That was fantastic. Could you incorporate some anal in your stories? In a lot of these group situations I think it would work real well.

Great story, but how does this fit under the Incest category?

Good story, just wondering why was it on the Incest category. I kept waiting for her daughter to join in or something like that.

best story ever. Write another chapter, please.

Hi folks,

This will be incest in the coming chapters. I now realize that I might have put this chapter in interracial and the later ones in incest. Apologies for that

The next season she will be having a big belly and milk tanks for the training sessions , i wonder how she is going to explain that to her husband...

More and maybe add the daughter and husband too.

Brake down the chapters

Is this character an homage to the adult actress avy Scott? Because I love her so much. Great story hope chapter two involves her daughter too.

Hi,

Yes. The description is based on Avy Scott. I'm a big fan of her.

Grt story

2nd part

that was a hot story. loved how Avy seemed so innocent and naive and the boys managed to turn her out. Hope they have more in store for her at the final game. Also loved how they talked dirty about her during sex and how she was initially offended but later accepted it.

Still waiting the read about Asa (Tamika's mom), isn't she also a teacher there?

@anon - Ada’s story is in the works. Have got an idea on how to work it out but will try to get to it soon

brought back memories of one of my favourite reads: Miss Sarah Stevens and her friends of Westville High sluts written by Zaxxon and other authors. So hot.

Easily a five star. Very interesting. Great writing here.

it would make a great x-rated movie

Maybe next story the team could blackmail avy to do it again but with more guys and maybe Isis

great continue writing with alot of intimate description

All your stories are fabulous. The India based stories are equally awesome. Unless you are an Indian I don't know how you have managed to get the nuances there right?

Best freaking story I've read in a long time. Author goes to top of my list.

Her slow decline is perfect!!! Very well done.

Well written story. One of the best I've read.

This story describes in detail how a good housewife and mother is seduced into a BBC slut by her students.

I hope that you continue this story with a few more chapters and don't make us wait so long for the next sequel.

Maybe you can tell us when the next sequel will be released.

Great storyline. Well written. How about at State the daughter joins the group?

Can you tell us when do you plan release of 2nd chapter?

Chapter 2 will probably be a month. It's mostly done except for the ending portions.

we need more (and hopefully a little bit more of heels, stockings, plug, vibrator...)

Yeeeessss. More is coming. Thx very much @vegitto306 . By th way, I agree with anonymous : very high heels, collar, cuffs, mini dress, stockings, plug, vibrator are obviously welcome ;-)

Cant't wait

Any news?

The chapter has turned out way way bigger than I thought. Reached the finale but a bit burnt out.

Asking a question to folks who happen to check this message - would it be ok if I split the chapter into 2 or even more three.

The issue is that the slow seduction portion might fall a bit flat if not read in one go. Will continue arriving writing and try to finish in a week but anyone who wishes to make a suggestion is welcome.