All Comments on 'Mom's Taboo Wish'

You write very well

Enjoyed the story immensely.

Cracking story, well told.

Very well done.

Extremely well written. Loved the way you developed the spark between Miranda and Brendan instead of being a quick roll in the bed.

All I can say is, AMAZING!!!! Great job!

I don’t need to read anything else today. Perfect

A terrific story with several splashes of humor mixed in. One of my favorite writers on here. A great slow burn then you turn the heat up to 100. 5 stars. And keep up the great writing.

Very well done. Third person can be tricky (so I've been told) but you easily wove a great story.

GR8 story .

Loved it. Thanks for sharing

That is how stories are supposed to be written...

I like your writing style and the content

Well! I should have seen That one coming. (The Gen[i]e!)

I wish I could give it ten out of five!! Wonderful story! And please send Gene my way! I really need a genie to send the woman of my dreams into my life!

A little drawn out but really enjoyed the story thanks for writing it probably little more than most I spent most of my teen years in Lexington and Versailles. Oh what fun it was skateboarding those dang hills

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Fantastic story!! I made me wish I had put the moves on my own mother when the opportunity presented itself.

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

Excellent story, inventive and well written.

If she was the town bike, I hope had std testing.

Wow! Such a sexy storey! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank you, THANK you, THANK YOU!!

You are a genius at this genre.

Be Well and Happy,

Paul

Loved the story. Love how you write. The thing at the end still has me puzzled, though. The whole hairdresser genie thing was out of left field and did nothing for the story. The other couple was entirely superfluous in my mind. Was the guy a gal at some point? Is that what you meant? they're in the story just so Gene can point out that he somehow nudged the main couple toward incest? I didn't see that anyway in the scene at the shop. Other than that entirely too enigmatic scene at the end, you've written a tender, touching love story, though i did think Mom was unnecessarily cruel a few times. Maybe she was just holding back enough to not get hurt in case her feelings weren't reciprocated. Great stuff! Thanks for writing! I almost missed reading it as there were a few other Mom/son stories debuting today

Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Slow burning the sexual tension. You should give us a follow-up, so much more to let out! 5/5

Liked the story but it needed more sex and what sex there was was kind of short 4 stars

Fantastic and fun story!

What a turn of events, to see a Gene morph into a genie. A nice, unexpected surprise. Thank you for the extended and well thought out storyline, with quite a bit of details to it. I've been in Lexington a few times, and to think the two landed there, to live their lives in Baptist country. A charming twist. I initially wondered how Nashville popped up, and realised that Mayfield is not far from TN.

The helix reference was well placed, and shows the author's deep knowledge on multiple issues such as the volcanic explosion of Krakatora. I hadn't heard about that one, though I had recently been reading about Tambora's eruption and its aftermath. I especially liked the use of the term supper. It is rather unusual in that particular context.

The sex scenes were well described, though it sounded a bit forward and a tad fast, especially where the mother goes straight to "fucking", though not quite unusual. The portion where she expects to move with her son, when he goes to university, is not quite realistic. It could have been more of an expectation, signals that are picked up from both sides and worked on. Well, that is my opinion.

The description of the mother looking at her own reflection on the TV screen is well thought out. There is something quite sensual, in the description of her curved haunches covering her son's face. The part where the son's face is hidden evokes a lovely picture of deep, sensual acceptance of their special relationship. It puts the reader right in the picture, as a silent spectator, as the boy (man) has his face ensconced in his mother's buttocks. A pity he did not venture further afield in the opposite direction.

Teaching him to kiss her, after the fact is an act of supreme attraction. It is nice to read that she plans to gently teach him the nuances of body fluids. That they do, at times, have sex without the ritual of showering, is especially encouraging. Though brushing teeth would have been sufficient, to get rid of the barbeque breath. The picture of her lying prone brings up quite a few visions of her (exquisite) buttocks and all the possibilities lying therein...

Cheers!

I really like your stories, well done.

5 stars

Isn't life grand .... someone?

Thank you, it makes me warm inside.

Well, this was a breath of fresh air! I loved the witty banter between mother and son, and the ease with which you wrote them so naturally transitioning from mother and son to lovers. Such a clever premise. Fantastic work!

Sweet, lightly emotional, sexy, as two grow together, and a bit funny

Sounds like a good life

Good luck to these two!, and to the Genie!

To my anonymous sibling below, I would gladly read your reviews, and your recommendations!

Finally! A story that is well written, entertaining, witty… I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!

I don't know if it was intentional or not but the mother came across as really slutty....not very erotic.

A beautiful story.

Thanks to everyone for the wonderful comments! I appreciate the encouragement and the votes.

If anyone is interested in owning this story permanently, you can find it on my page at Smashwords.

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1021740

Excellent little tale! Wouldn't mind seeing Gene make a few more appearances here and there. Nudging people a little bit this way and that for whatever the situation may call for.

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Absolutely ludicrous dialogue.

Enchanting, I love this story.

Enchanting, I love this story.

Really enjoyed reading your story.

Beautiful story of finding true love ❤️😘 . . . thank you

Great story. Loved the slow build as their love for each other grew.

"If I had been gay or something, that would have been the final straw. My moral degeneracy would have been God's judgement on both of us."

You really had to ruin a great story with homophobic lines, and on a site that promotes sexualty.

okay, that's not the April Fool's twist I was expecting.

("maybe they simply won't do it? The twist is that this is a shaggy dog story?")

Not bad.

Very well written and it ended on exactly the right note. Anything beyond would be anti climactic. Thank you.

Great story. 5 Stars. Having said that, it was longer than necessary, I'm not sure about this, (His strokes grew mor frenzied, his belly slapping against the back of his mother's thighs.) I was under the impression that Brendan was on top, not where he could be slapping against the back of his mother's thighs. Last, having seven pages, there should have been more pussy fucking. More than a half page.

Great 5⭐️love story how their relationship grew and the love between them.

I loved the way the tension built slowly i am not hy any strech of the imagination a writer or a critic. I know what i lile. I know thw author likes baseball and he likes great moviea which i learnws by a couple of small but familiar references. There waa a quote from Butch Casiday and the Sundance Kid and a reference to the shawHank redemption. So. Having said that you had me like Tim Robbins in Bull Durham. I wanted to Just shout " is sombody gonna fuxl someone tonight? " . Anyway great story