All Comments on 'The Happiness That Is Holly'

One of the better stories I have read recently

Jesus. If the Hallmark Channel did porn, this would be it.

Intro and wrap, just that hint of "if they only knew" tension.

The action was visual, hot and dirty... the characters were compelling and likeable.

This was a great read!

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Well written and very hot. You do need to change the word ‘musty’ that you use to describe her vaginal fragrance. It is a smell like a damp basement. Replace it with musky, which is more of a primal, animal scent. Animal musk is added to many expensive perfumes.

Loved it! Didn’t hurt that it’s out of my playbook, other then the marriage ;) the first DP is always amazing. Good read!

Sometimes “Ryan and I” should be “Ryan and me”. Have someone explain it to you, please.

Very hot!

WIN! Five wins, actually, and a favorite. I love Holly! She's my kind of girl, for sure.. quirky, nerdy, fun and loves sex. I'd marry that in a heartbeat.