All Comments on 'Hey Alanna'

Aww what a sweet and loving story of a devious tease and her locked sub. I loved the moment where she warned him about the step he couldn't see.

Good premise.

Seriously lacks details.

"A few minutes later, she cums as I suck on her clit." That's it? That's supposed to be erotic? NOT!

Needs DETAILS. Needs dialog during whatever sex is happening/not happening.

Needs much more teasing/edging his cock before anything else happens to/with it.

Three stars.

To anonymous who wants more details. Hey, use your imagination! Fill in your own details. The author did a great job setting the scene and supplied plenty details for most of us.

Enjoyed the story alot, keep up the good work

Well done Rebell1ous, I always love your work. This for me is the perfect combination of dom/sub without it being dominatrix. And I love the mentions of her nails, a particular fetish for me. The only bad part about this story is I didn't see a "Ch. 1" at the end, meaning it may only be a one off... devastating...

Great story would love to see more of these characters and their evolving relationship.