All Comments on 'Birthday Pool Party Ch. 00'

Very educational Witty! Thank you for the effort you put into this.

Thank you for the brief character summary. I didn't realize there where do many.

Is the high school mascot a Tigress?

Witty,

I've been reading your tale since the beginning and have enjoyed the journey of Steven and the extended family. This cast of characters is very complete and as far as I can tell has little or no spoilers for readers not familiar with your tale. I agree that you may have thought of another title, but isn't that where it started? Lexi sucking Steven's cock during the pool party? I agree that it should mature. You have a gift, but maybe break off in a few directions. Marcia seems to be a little conflicted. After all the Slut Sisters can't always be together?

This was a good idea....thanks.

I never noticed the name of the high school, but now that I have...boo! I was, am, and always will be on Team Dawn. For those who don't get the reference, I'm sorry. I'd let you know, but unlike the other site who doesn't have a problem mentioning Lit, Lit seems to have a problem mentioning other sites, so I can't refer you.

My only advice is, if you ever find the reference, disregard Witty's misguided loyalties, and always side with Dawn over Adrienne. Lol. 5/5 stars for the cast list.

Dewey Cheatham

Team Dawn

@TheJoker33 Thanks!

@AccelarVester I didn't realize just how many characters I'd have to add when I started this!

@Lospanda Haha, good guess! But no, it's a Hart.

@msdr4d Yeah, the Birthday Pool Party is how it all started! And yeah, life may try and pull the Slut sisters apart in the future :(

@Anonymous I'm glad you like it!

@Dewey Cheatham The high school is named after the most famous of the girls! I actually agree with you, and I think the supermodel is incredibly selfish. Still, she's famous, so it makes sense that California would name a high school after a famous supermodel!

@Anonymous Respect!

I noticed that Lexi has not had her own POV chapter the other day and then you mentioned it here. Is there a particular reason that she has not had one? Thanks!

@everyone I like the idea that the reader can't see inside Lexi's head. The crazy brat is a mystery!

@Anonymous Oops, I should have put anonymous, not everyone. :P

Great story! I like the depth and variety of characters. Hope it continues.

Tbh, I don't recall all the characters you listed. I would also argue that Keith, David, and Nicole qualify as major characters. Keith and David are the villains while Nicole is a slut sister.