All Comments on 'Bananas'

It's nice to have a visceral memory of one's sister such as you (or the narrator) have via bananas. You neglected to mention if the bananas were Chiquita bananas or not. If they were, does Haley resemble the Chiquita banana woman? She is, after all, the top banana. Five stars ~~JB

I would have liked Haley to finish her practice on our protagonist by swallowing his load in her throat.

A lovely, sweet story!

You never disappoint! Another little zipper-stretcher from a master

You have me so hard right now

Well done. Just one thing...I have never seen a woman's nipples heave up and down. Usually her whole torso heaves and her nipples go along for the ride. (She was flushed and her nipples heaved up and down with each breath.). Good story, though.

Couldn't even get past the first few paragraphs.

Sister shoves banana into pussy, then gives it to her brother to eat.

Gee, wonder what will happen next?

It needed to be stretched out a bit more. It moved too quick. We’ll give you another chance with Chapter 2

Totally love it.

Please continue!