All Comments on 'Caught'

"To be continued if there is interest..."...This was already too much!!!

No interest, untagged Cuck tale

1/5

Just another cheating, faithless skank story....not interesting except to cheaters.

No tags and just another entitled feminist lead story of a skank bitch cuckolding her husband with his best friend. Wow what a fucked up bitch character. 1☆

interesting scenario, Part 2? thanks

Continue it!! She needs to fuck the neighbor too!!!!

Happily married?

Only continue if you can wake your husband too start divorce proceedings.

Stop while you're behind. This was not worth the time invested reading.

"To be continued if there is interest..." - Don't post an incomplete story unless YOU'RE interested in continuing, ideally you have already continued.

Quit no more crap? unreadable

Why would we want more of a story about a wife who obviously does not love (and probably never loved) her husband……. « solely out of respect for the "other" man in our company; the proverbial third wheel. »

The rest of the story would probably be about her taking the young neighbor for a ride anyway.

Yeah, waiting on the next chapter with what should be a series.

So, a cheating slut wife story. The young neighbour could either blackmail the slut wife into fucking him. Or... tell the husband what he saw and perhaps the slut will get what she deserves: divorce. Also, the husband's BFF will get his head kicked in. He deserves it since he has no respect for his so called best friend.

Was this meant to be erotic or romantic in some way? Cheating on your spouse while they sleep in the next room, is not romantic. It just means the two arseholes get off cucking the poor husband. I so hope he get's a chance for revenge.

So, she can't masturbate because she's married but she can fuck somebody other than her husband? Sadly, the story doesn't get any better after that logic bomb.

Can I get my money back on this?

I see no point in extending this offering any further. It does not add anything extra to the cheating slut wife su-genre. Hope you were able to get your rocks off writing it

Like someone else pointed out ....can't get herself off because she's married but she has no problem screwing her husbands best friend? Please just stop.

"To be continued "

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1. Also, if you're not sure whether or not to continue your own story, if you have such indifference in it, DON'T!

Answering the last sentence of the story - no there is no interest.

For the idiots complaining, it's in the section about cheating wives. Don't go there if you don't like it.

Don't bother continuing

No interest here.

Well I have to admit that I was surprised at the amount of comments; mostly negative I'd have to say. As far as this being an untagged cuckold story, I specifically intended that part to be a surprise, so if you read through to the end of the 3,000ish words to get to it, thanks.

This is intended to be a fun and playful character introduction, there's a balance that must be struck between character development and a ten thousand word intro that doesn't really get to the action parts; so I intend other parts to this tale, but writing them as stand alone chapters, or independent adventures for these and perhaps other characters.

Calling me naughty names is rude and reflects poorly on your upbringing, so shame on those that went down that road. As far as not wanting to "self entertain" my stress away, I'm married, so I don't think I should have to; there was nothing in my short story that suggested I couldn't.

Happily married; very much so, we've been together since we were teens, it's been a great ride so far, and this other man of mine has been along for much of it, on and off between his own relationships.

As far as respect; we've done it right in front of hubby before, even before he was my husband, but doing it in front of him now isn't something I'm comfortable with, so respectfully out of his sight, not rubbing his proverbial nose in it. Of course he knows what I get up to, he's encouraged it over the years...

As to the watching neighbor, I'm not entirely sure what to do with him, story wise, but the ordinary scenarios that have already been explored here in depth aren't what I was necessarily thinking. For now I think he's going to sit on what he's seen and just awkwardly wave and say hello, he not sure himself how to proceed; or even if to proceed.

Romantic and erotic; both of those to be honest, I've known this other man almost as long as I've known my husband, so there is a love there.

Anyway, thank you for the positive/constructive comments. As to the negative ones, it's far easier to be a critic than to produce something for others consumption, Jackie.

do not bother to end it!!

Yes, I am in, i would like to learn more about this woman and why she is banging a guesst in their home.

In LIT it appears ALL women are prone to their hormones and spread legs to all but their husbands - thank God, this is only fiction.

Sounds like a report of some kind

Rather boring, didn't finish it.

No finish no score

Very badly written, no interest, too many mistakes.

Interesting build-up. I'd like to see where this goes. Does the husband find out? Did he already know?

Does the 20-something neighbor blackmail the wife for a little fun of his own? I wait with bated breath.