All Comments on 'Vault Prologue'

Excellent start. Thanks for sharing it.

Seems you struck first. Good job 😁💯

I'll be waiting anxiously for the start!

Oh you were so right. You should write Fallout with lots of sex. Great start. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

"loading bullets in his shotgun"

I BEG your pardon?

SirDigbyChickenCaesar, I'm sorry. I knew that line wasn't right when I wrote it. But I really don't care about guns. Plus, it's intentional. I could've Googled it like I always do, but I didn't. It implies that Michael is not aware of guns or not interested in them. Not everyone is obsessed with bikes; some people like flowers too. shotshells or shells. Happy now?

Great lead in for the story. Part 2, soon? 5/5

Proper gun ammo and specs are just stuff that some authors use to show off knowledge. All it really is , is filler to make a book thicker and it's irrelevant in every story I've read that contains it. However, I did kinda expect sex, lol