All Comments on 'Deviant Workspaces: Off the Line'

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After all, who doesn’t like fucking someone else’s wife during the lunch break? Of course, her husband might be getting some afternoon strange himself, and that would piss her off royally.

What did this mess have to do with the LW category?

I have seen the same thing to happen in a local factory. They think that no one sees them, but they are wrong.

@Impo, yes, I hate when authors try to write out grunts.

Wow! Loved tbe eloquent conversation from Salma. Haha.

Sorry, but it takes more than a tag and a category to make a story a Loving Wives story. I would recommend Erotic Encounters, as this story is nothing more than a single encounter with a (bad) sex scene. Seriously, the "sound effects" were not good, much less erotic.

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I would also recommend not using tags to add content to a story, but writing those details into the story itself. The purpose of tags is to tell readers what is in the story.

If you want one or both of them to be married (to different people or each other), put that in the story.

If you want one of them to be the boss of the other, put that in the story.

This was not a Loving Wives story. It wasn't much of anything but a time waster.

Can't say I liked all the gutterals with no conversation.

Just a little cheat, no story, no consequences, waste of time

A bit quirky, kinda falls outside of the general categories. Not a whole bunch of substance.

Loving both the short stories series, something different.

I do think it would help to give a motif for those involved . Maybe her husband doesn't pay her any attention anymore, or they didn't marry for love, they married because she gotten pregnant. She could have caught him peeing outside. Boredom. Or alternatively, some insight on how they initially linked up. I honestly don't know how these job situationships start actually, but would love some insight. And as far as the people who are upset about the category, I think technically this couldn't be a loving wives story because while there is a wife in the story, her love for her husband cannot be quantified in this story because he's not really in it.

Corporate whores and assholes.