All Comments on 'What Shapes Us?'

Liked it.

Short & original.

Write a follow up how it affected his life.

If it doesn't have tags, why would I go any further? It's a common courtesy to let the reader know what the story is about.

And????

A terrible son who should have told his dad. The uncle deserved some punishment. Accepting a job from that scumbag made the son a loser.

No one died? This is a real oddball for LW. You express yourself well with words and the text flows naturally. Some writers spend their lifetimes trying to get to that point.

Another stupid story.

My sister caught my mother. I lost all respect for my mother. My dad work his ass off to give her the things she wanted. Built a house put a lake on it because she liked to fish. She not a want for anything. She goes to work for the government and ends up being a slut later in life. What she did to my dad in his later years is inexcusable in my book and let her have it. Nobody messes with my dad and disrespects him the way she did. He was one hell of a father. She was now one hell of a mother. Now she is just another stupid bitch

It’s just a narrative about a perverted and twisted guy. Looks like you are setting him to be another pathetic cuck since he didn’t tell his Dad about his moms cheating and he gets off watching others. Nonsense

OK, what's the point???

Pussy

Little asshole certainly was loyal to his father, letting his uncle get away with porking his cheating cunt mother. Bet Uncle Asshole was his real Pappy.

scorpiojj had it right. This is a poor story about a son and wife who both betrayed the boy's father, One star