All Comments on 'Font of Fertility Ch. 27'
by BreakTheBar
- 37 Comments
SkyFlyingFalcon18 days agoVery efficiently making Benji and Jay intensely unlikable and yet involving them even further in the story.
Anonymous18 days agoThe plot thickens.
Also, how is Leandro going to pay Jeremiah for the sanctuary? Seats don't give away magic for nothing.
Anonymous18 days agoUh oh Esmeralda got caught spying... Another very enjoyable chapter with unexpected twists and turns. Looking forward to his return to school and all the potential mayhem that will bring.
Thanks
Anonymous18 days agoOooooo
Sounds like the new guy just created something that strikes at the heart of the Death Seat power matrix. Potentially a magical WMD against the Death Seats, but definitely against their ability to gather intel, not that attaching a spirit to another seat's shadow isn't a pretty bold affront.
Anonymous18 days agoLove it, and keep em coming! I was wondering what would happen to that shadow trap, and I'm glad that thread wasn't dropped!
BigDog194717 days agoThe story continues to get more depth and the character development is deeping.
Thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us. I appreciate the work you do represented with each chapter.
Jim
FrenchTomcat17 days agoI suspect Esmeralda had attached a protective spirit to him. We'll see :)
Nice épisode, my guts tell me that things are about to get messy with his friends knowing and becoming liabilities.
Anonymous17 days agokeep them coming your great at this series I would like a couple chapters per month but I won't be greedy
Anonymous16 days agoNeed to release these stories faster. Stories great, just annoying having to wait a month+ per few pages. lol.
Anonymous16 days agoYour stories are awesome and I have throughly enjoyed each one. Hope you keep them coming.
Slofred16 days agoDAMN I so want to read the next installment right now. Great chapter and an amazing ending. What is Esmerelda upset about the ninjas or the hidden death monitor she put on him? What amazing powers is she going to let him know he has because of the encapsuled ninjas. That little sward he made has some amazing potential. It immediately negates so many attacks and hidden spies in one fell swoop. 5 Stars for an amazing chapter and keep sharing your vivid imagination with the rest of us. THANKS again.
cat83394216 days agoThat was interesting, nice to see the plot and story moving forward, while holding onto the sexy times.
Anonymous16 days agoQuite possibly one of the only chapters that I don't like. This story has been really hit or miss over the last year, which is a shame, because 10 through 18 were *unspeakably* good. Where's that author? I miss him.
Anonymous16 days agoGood chapter. Wish there was more that happened. Seems like this chapter was more of a build up for other things that are happening in the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
clearlyenigmatic15 days agoI love this series and very much enjoy every new episode. Keep up the good work!
dontyouwishyouknew15 days agoThis chapter is very, very good! I love that he pulled the spirits into the sword, and look forward to what powers the sword acquired because of it. Please keep writing, BreakTheBar.
Anonymous14 days agoI follow 3 series. War of the Races, Home for Horny Monsters and yours. I look forward to reading new chapters in all. Font of Fertility is the one I look forward to the most.
Anonymous14 days agoWelcome back and another great chapter. I am torn between this series and the quaranteam series you do on which one is my favorite. I am happy to say while the sex is good the writing and story are great. Great job!
Anonymous13 days agoFinally, the plot moves one step forward. Iknow the story is free as are the rest of your works. I really enjoy them. I just am like a two year old, I want what I want, and I want it NOW.
Anonymous13 days agoAnother excellent chapter, I'm really looking forward to seeing how he manages to fix his magic input vs. output problem.
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