All Comments on 'Vampires of Port-Au-Prince'

Glad to see you back Spam Sam.

It looks like another poorly written outline of a story that might be interesting if you could be bothered to do a basic amount of research and world biulding.

Will given you a hint make the characters interesting, their skin color is not interesting. Give them personalities beyond jackasses. Knives and sharp objects go through bulletproof vests.