by Antarctica77
Wow that was depressing, interested to see where this goes though and how the house enters into this.
I'm looking forward to where you take this story. You've set the stage, and we will see what happens to our protagonist. Nice start and excellent writing.
I agree with IJS0904's critique. I'm a sucker for the haunted house genre, and you have many different paths you could take this. Cheers!
Really hope this doesn't turn into another cuck story. Has fairly decent potential.