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LivesToReadLivesToRead14 days ago

Awesome, thanks for the ride. I started following you but you made an error. You exposed the sim. Now your future chapters will hold few less character investment. “Once you’ve seen through the illusion it can no longer affect you.” Still I look forward to reading you again.

LackingPlotArmorLackingPlotArmor12 days agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback! Fair criticism as I had to make the decision between focusing on chapter style scenarios versus more of a 2-3 part novella set. The draft I wrote for the sequel pivots immensely but it flowed so I felt I had to reveal the illusion to lessen the abrupt shift. I haven't given that draft a fresh edit yet, so it might be a while before you can read it.

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I've been dabbling with original storylines, erotic and not, for a while now. This is my first time publishing anything since fanfiction.net a looong time ago, so I'm testing the waters and my skills. I write for work, but that's boring stuff.