All Comments on 'Couple on the Cruise Ch. 02'

by emily_blue

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JiminNCJiminNC1 day ago

Love it, Emily! Currently on a cruise… so this story feeds right into my desires . Can’t wait to meet his Master!

FailedscoutFailedscout1 day ago

Great story so far but I wish that the chapters were longer.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

very hot

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Good start, but have the MC act like a guy while being force feminized. Like he goes back to his cabin, changes out of the dirty panty's and tries to tamper with the cage. He doesn't get out, but his reluctance angers Maria. I think the slow burn is much more realistic than having him put on a cage and lingerie and he's magically converted.

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