by Samuelx
Another weak outline.
We don't care about his race or his porn interests. He is the main character of the world burning. And his response is to dump his family and escape into porn???? Then just run when the zombies come for him.
How does he survive?
Why did the family dog follow him?
Why was he heading north?
You know why should we care about the story and character, but it all you put out Spammy Sam.