All Comments on 'The Office'

Nicely paced as the sex escalates. The “back and forth” 1st person easily followed/easily imagined. At first, thought you should have/could have lengthened each first person moment, but doing so would have detracted from the escalation you created.

are you confused on who has a cock and a pussy? they both cant have both of them

I don't find the "back and forth first person" easy to follow at all.

I can't even tell who is who in paragraphs 5 to 9. I mean, I can't tell if it's one person or both of them.

If you had put something like "Him:" and "Her:" between paragraphs where you switch narrators, that would have been more helpful.