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dachshundboydachshundboy15 days ago

Very nice! You've definitely gotten better at balancing the eroticism of the situation with the technical aspects of rope bondage (in the first part, you kind of get a bit /too/ desctipyive about the practice, that it kind of took away from the sexiness of what was actually happening). I hope that you eventually write a third part where both (or all three of them) forego any pretense of training for Carrie's shows and it’s a purely sexual encounter! Maybe, adding a blindfold so Carrie can neither more nor see?

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