All Comments on 'Pole Dance Gets Screwed'

I think you write very well, and the way you write puts pictures across in the readers mind very well. Despite this I dont think the story line itself really fitted well into this genre. The story was, yes lesbianism, but was more based around the themes of dominance/submissive and potentially slightly too violent for this particular catagory. It would sit better in another catagory more so than " Lesbian Stories".

This story is just amazing!!! I've read so many times and each time I had a great orgasm please make an update soon!!$