by AlectaShadow
Wow. That was intense. I liked it much better than the story that inspired it. To my eyes and ears, it felt not so much about misogyny per se, but much more about the exquisite thrill of submission and surrender. Mixing submission in with abnegation of core values, even of "self," can be shockingly erotic. Very very well done.
A pleasant surprise seeing my own story get a shout out up top, and this is itself a very good story, though definitely different from its inspiration. You really dug into the debate aspect which "Please, Sir..." glided over.
sensuous surrender is the expression I like to use on my kitty. when she starts purring she knows that she has lost again!
Your instincts here for what constitutes "sexy" are spot-on, and your writing skills are excellent. I agree that this shouldn't be taken as a personal political manifesto. It's just a very erotic story, well told. Congrats.
Astonishing. Anguishing. So well conceived and well crafted. So shamefully, powerfully arousing. So appalling how compelling this is.