All Comments on 'Taking Chances'

You did a fantastic job of showing how nudity is a sensation on its own, as well as the sexuality that the vulnerability brings. Wonderfully well done.

You've done it again, and I have been at this for so many years, I know quality. I also get it, that many who read these tales, don't strictly do so fo the story line, or plot. You have the ability to WEAVE both, into something passionate and sensual, while still involving the Wild side.

Kudos

A hot sex scene with a great story to go with it.

This was absolutely great. Closing my eyes, I could put all of your words into a picture. Definately left me wanting more. I hope they will continue on in other stories :)

Steamy sex in steamy weather. Yes!

Reading your story was a pleasure,you have combined several situations that have brought forth some very vivid sex encounters.I really hope that you will write another chapter in the life of this very sweet girl.Thanks for the post. ....Rich

I loved this! Well written, beleivable and so sensuous it sizzzels! Great work!

Sultry, sexy and sweet, very nicely done. I love a bit of a storm in an erotic story and your's was great. Good luck, as if you need it.

A great read and a powerfully erotic story!

I enjoyed your story, thanks!

Again, and again, you find a way to weave a tale that's as much arousing as entertaining!! Well done!!

Highly enjoyable not just for the sizzling hot sex...

Good luck in the contest!

A perfect weave of a romantic story and sweet sultry sex. Perfectly paced and so well written, as usual. You took no chances writing such a beautiful story: you left me longing for the sequel.