All Comments on 'Asian Innocence Manipulated Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
YES

please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter...

i can't wait

near1111near1111about 8 years ago
good story

i like your exotic Setting and also the fact that she is so sweet yet so pure and un corrupted. 5 stars-

Rapier875Rapier875over 4 years ago
It's very good, but....

.....there's no need to spend half of page 1 giving a resumé of everything that's already happened. If people haven't read the earlier chapters then they need to go and do so.

Rapier

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