All Comments on 'All Dolled Up'

by TE999

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DesertPirateDesertPirateover 15 years ago
Very Good

Now that's the right way to escape a shrew wife! You sir have a seriously warped mind, I like that!

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
What a fantasy

Ummm what a present! Imagine the possibilities....men dolls for women whose husbands ignore them....princess dolls, knight dolls....surfer boy dolls....the list could go on and on....I loved it! I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 15 years ago
Scary

This was a scary story, but erotic.

Saucy_SageSaucy_Sageover 15 years ago
Chucky, the erotic transsexual!

A very entertaining work. The only thing that detracted from it was your consistent misuse of "it's." I loved the last line, with the sparks and the wintry sky

JackLuisJackLuisover 15 years ago
Happy Ending Christmas

Loved the story TE999. The segmentation was nice and just as I like it. Nice and tight!

sacksackover 15 years ago
clever, suspenseful, well written

Always a delight to read your stories, Tom. Wish I could write something this effective!

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 15 years ago
Love it!

Love your twisted mind! Awesome! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yikes!

I was hoping, when the main character saw his love in his wife's face, that somehow the spirit would take over and help the wife to become more of what he needed. Just call me a (horny) romantic.

xo from a friend who has decided her hit and miss readings should be anon this year.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow, that was something

That was an amazing story, one that really lived up to the 'erotic horror' title. One of the better short stories I've read. Great job! Hope to read more like this.

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