All Comments on 'New Life Ch. 01-02'

has lots of potential, good luck with it

good start. please continue. imagination is what really counts. the asthetics can be worked by anyone. dont let it slow you down too much. interested to see where you take your characters next.

when is the rest of it going to be here?

loved it wish it had been me 45 years a go but still can dream

Good story needs to be longer

More please……..