All Comments on 'Distractions Ch. 12'

That was a great chapter , but now i am about to die waiting for the next one already . That Ben guy needs to fall off the face of the earth. I don't like him already. I hope Gavin kicks his ass! Red and Gavin belong together , and I hope this asshole don't ruin it!

HOT HOT HOT KEEP IT COMIN CUZ I CANT GET ENOUGH LOL GREAT WORK TRUELY WONDERFUL

gavin's character is totally selfish and jealous i am hoping u don't put ben as a grey character as seen in almost all of the triangle love stories i read here all in all it was avg.by your standards hoping for some innovative move in the story

Hotness, I have missed you terribly ((lol)) This chapter kicks ass! Gavin's inner dialogue is sooo revealing & Bren is a fucking riot!! And alls I can say about Red is 'Girl get yo freak on!!' As for this new cat Ben, two words: smooth criminal (sing it with me y'all!!) Bring on chp 13, preferably this year (nudge nudge) p.s take that Wilson Bitch!

I never leave comments, but I must say that I was feeling pretty abandoned since the last chapter... I'm glad you returned to us, and certainly hope we won't have to wait another five months for the next chapter. I'm not worried about the other guy ruining Red's relationship with Gavin so much. Red tends to be a little... slow... at times, but she and Gavin are for real, and the wannabe usurper seems to love *himself* too much to do anything more than stir up a bit of temporary anxiety... can't wait to see what happens next!!!

i so wanna a gavin tooooooooo

Welcome back; you were gone too long & I really missed this story.

I'm ready for the next update.

I am so glad you updated this. I thought you never would. I love Gavin...but i kind of like Ben too. This is hard. so so hard. Please don't leave us waiting for so long this time. : )

Some editing mistakes but I barely noticed because I was so engrossed in the story! Ben had better keep his hands off and Isabelle had better stay strong. Thanks for the great chapter. Fingers crossed it won't take as long as this one did!

This story is sooooo good!!!! I cant wait til the nxt chapter to see what happens...please update soon!!!!

God, I was pissed that it took you 6 mos. to update but...that was totally and completely worth it so I retract all previous thoughts and emotions about how long it took you to post the new chapter!! If we keep getting chapters like that I don't care how long you take!! Update as soon as you can...i know how life can get in the way!

Great job! Keep it Up!

I'm glad you are back. I was missing this story. I love Gavin and Red together. As far as Ben was concerned, I didn't like him in the beginning. He seems to be all about Ben. As if money can buy a person. I really hope Red sees through that and doesn't mess up what she has with Gavin! I hope the next chapter is coming soon!

Great update! Ben is going to be an interesting addition to this. I hope Reds isnt too naive about him.

Keep it coming. I have been waiting for months! This chapter is the best yet.

Thanks for a great read. Glad they made up but it seems that the good doctor wants Red. This will be interesting to see how this all plays out. Isn't Red pregnant? I am surprised that she hasn't told Gavin or her brother.

I have been waiting and checking for this chapter for soooooo long and it was worth the wait sex scene was awesome and story is great overall I know your busy but please write the next chapter soon!

I love this story. I pretty much read it all in one sitting. Gavin and Bren are cool, no bull s- alpha males. Ben is smooth and calculating and wants Isabella, definitely. I'd love to read more. I hope you'll be back to continue this great story.

write the next chapters soon!!! this is sooooo good!!! if you dont i dont know what i will do!!!

you & your writing! Please hurry w/ the next chapter

Can't wait to read more. Ben is going to try something...i just know it. More please!

Please Please update this story , it is my fav on this site . Red and Gavin Have had so much happen between them. They deserve their happliy ever after!

I really like this story. It was pretty good. You did leave a lot of questions unanswered but I guess its to build our anticipation. Please update this story there is much more that can happen for these characters.... I can't wait....

Please hurry and update this story!! and PLEASE let RED still be the strong smart woman who doesnt fall for Ben's bull@#$!.

I know it is hard to resist money, power and good looks.. but please let her be able to give him a hard block of reality. Her and Gavin deserve their moment in the sun...

I loved this story and I really hope you finish it soon!!

I'm in love with your story, and I'd love it if you finished! (:

Don't give up on this story!!!!! Red and Gavin's relationship rests in your hands!!!

oh man i can read this storie again and again and it would never get old! plsss continue, i can't wait to read more about there storie!!

-Arleen :)

I was so excited only to discover there is a chapter or two missing. I know you are busy with school but any chance we can get a something soon??

I love the characters and plot of this story. I miss this story a great deal. Please continue to write it when you have a chance.

this has been great! especially all the punching done by red. i hope it all works out in cali, even with ben in the way.

Awesome, awesome, awesome story.

I couldn't stop reading.

Please post the next chapter soon.

please write another chapter I keep checking back anxiously!! I LOVE THIS STORY!

I thought this chapter would be the last one and when I get to the end it's not over! Oh, please finish the story! I absolutely love these two and your stories in general are amazing! Please let them have a happy ever after and don't keep us waiting too long to read it! :)

Oh my god PLEASE come back and update! I love this story so much!

Please Update this story and dont finish it sooon ! I love your stories and they keep me coming back here for more !

OMG I just read this entire series in a day. U gonna make it a book? I know somebody that would love to publish something like this! It only needs a tiny bit of editing but I love the story line!

please more!!!!!!

plsssss update the story..cnt wait to read whats gonna happen!!!!!

Amazing story!please update!!!

Please finish this brilliant story. The only thing thing that is a bit annoying is the spelling of tried (not tired) past tense of try, i.e. trying, tried.

Other than that, absolutely loved it.

I'd read quite a lot of this story a long time ago, but have just re-read all the chapters in the last couple of days, and yes - AN UPDATE WOULD BE MARVELLOUS! ;)

It's not finished, and we need more, damn it!

More quietly, an ending would be good.... *she says sweetly*

Thanks for such a good read. x

I couldn't stop reading. I promise I will go back and rate the previous chapters as 5 stars! wow. fantastic story, absolutely perfect.

We need more though!!!

Please update soon and double please don't let her fuck that Ben guy or any other guy for the matter. Same goes for Gavin who is surrounded by girls! I like it so much but if anyone of them screws up... That would definitely suck!!!

LOVED IT, n i read all of it when will there be more i cant believe how they had to overcome their problems but LOVED IT. MORE>>>>>

I loved this story, and I look forward to more on Gavin/Isabelle. Then for Bren to finally meet the woman for him!

This story is sooo goood. Please update. Tell whats happens with Gavin and Red.

This story is truly fantastic. You should continue writing the story and please have Red and Gavin together when she gets back!!!! I would hate too have them break up or have them give in to temptation during their time apart.

MORE PLEASE!!!!! Don't leave me hanging!

MORE!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!!

Please write some more, I want to know whats going to happen next!!

its such a good story :)

i see its been a long time since you've written about these characters but please don't forget about them and please write more!

this is a really good story. I'm looking forward to reading more about Red and Gavin.

I really love this story. One of my favorites. but are you going to post a new chapter to it?! I really wonder what will happen.

were is the rest of the story u have got to give us more it can not end like this give me more of gavin n red please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you can just leave the story like that plz finish i really want to no wats going to happen. plz dont stop writing

Loved it so much. Please continue please please please please please.

please continue. You cant leave the story hanging like... Its like a torture... Please continue the story.

I love this story & I dunno how long ago you write it & I don't care. just please please please do the end I'm almost crying! it's dramatic I know, but what the hell's happening? gavins proposing duh & she's obviously pregnant but what the hell's up with Ben? it seems like he's deliberately trying to make gavin think (in the long run) than she's sleeping with him to get in... please finish

thanks

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please don't stop there. what about the baby and Gavin proposing and what's going to happen with Ben?

will there ever be an update

Its been so long, please continue! I love this story

YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!

The story is good...I must admit but for you to write all of these 12 chapters with no ending has pissed me off. I do not think I even want to know the ending now...This story is too long for you to not have finished it, now that I know how you write I don't think I will be reading anything else that you post.

"Hey everyone. I'm at it again, and this time, the story was finished before I posted chapter 1.

Enjoy"

^That's what you wrote at the VERY beginning of this story yet you NEVER posted the ending???? What a waste of my Thursday night to read all of these chapters and not have an ending when you clearly said the story was finished.

I wished I had known it wasnt finished, wouldve skipped it.

Please, please, PLEASE finish this story! I NEED to know what happens!!!

hey amazing story please post ending!

just realized you haven't posted the ending for this story?? how could i think i've read the whole thing? you MUST finish! Red and Gavin totes have to end up together! SO PERFECT. I need to find a Gavin for myself now. HA.

I loved your story, please give us a happy ending!

What happened?? Loved this story until I realized there is no ending! Please finish this story and end our torment!

1st story I've read on this site & it's awesome! But where's the ending??? :-(

that was not the ending right? oh please update whenever you can!

Please tell me your going to finish this story and not leave me hanging, I need to know what's going to happen.

I didn't want to comment until I actually finished reading all the available chapters. I love your characters and the storyline. I hope that the good doctor doesn't try to get in between Gavin and Isabelle.. That would be horrible. I think these two make a great couple and their passion is really intense.. Can't wait for the next chapter... Thanks for the read!

Please finish this story! I love it and you wrote it amazingly I hope you intend on finishing it!

Is this story ever going to end?? :/ It's been really really really... long.

It's one of my favourites

I hate when someone writes a long ass story and then just leaves it incomplete, yet they have time to write a NEW story. It's happened more than once on this site and others. It's just plain RUDE. Good thing I skipped to the end. I had a feeling this would happen.

How does one end with a reference to a lil black box tucked in a pocket?! I'd like to ask that someone pick up where the story left off and write an ending.

PLEASE!!!!! Finish this story!!!!

OMG so I start this long story assuming its completed and it's not??! Please finish I read it all in stew hours waiting to get to the end and I'm left hanging? Hate that. Really good story, actually a favorite. Finish it!!!

Hope you're planning to update this too. This is my favorite of all your story. More power

Great smack down! I will save this for a while because it's an awesome story, but I will also delete it if you don't finish; assuming this cliffhanger was the ending. Thank you for sharing with us.

I agree with the other comments, this is one of the best stories on here. I also read this in like 2 days and was disappointed when I realized it wasn't finished. Great story, hope u finish it soon.

and its HotSprings22. I love it when I come upon wonderful stories such as yours with great plot, sizzling sex, amazing characterization, nail-biting angst, and wonderful, relatable characters. I turn into a 4 year old on Christmas morning with all of your stories to open and read and then coming upon 'Distractions' as the gem of them all. Thank you for sharing your talent. Hope you finish Gavin and Red's story. They can not afford to have theirs unfinished.

Once I found this story yesterday I spent most of the night and well into the early hours in the morning reading this! I LOVE Red and Gavin, I haven’t been invested in characters like these or rooted for two characters to finally be together for a really long time. So kudos to you for being a fantastic author, I swear if I could pay you for reading your work I would. I don’t know why but these two just pull at me, through their ups and down, highs and lows, mis-opportunities and opportunities, miscommunications and distractions you can't help but to smile and root for them. Hopefully these two FINALLY gets it right this time and make the grand gesture to each other so they can received there HAPPILY EVER AFTER! Because if they let Ben get in their way, Brenden needs to seriously kick both their asses! Don’t get me wrong, I kind of like Ben but would love to see him in a story by himself as a lead. I think Ben is a bit to mature for a character like Red and needs a female character that lived a bit (HINT! HINT! Just causally giving you a spinoff idea…lol) But I hope this story gets updated soon so we can see the ending to it! I know you said on your other story that you don’t know what direction you want to go with these two but at this point what is left for these two to do beside being with each other? How much more drama and distractions/miscommunication they can go through without looking foolish/childish

So much for you saying at the start of the first chapter that is was a finished story, where's the rest of it?

This cliffhanger has lasted to long.

Almost 3 years since the last chapter you posted, and the above is a quote from you Hotsprings, if it was finished, why has it been so long without the rest of it being posted? it's disappointing to get to the end of what I thought was a finished story only to see it's not.

They need their ending and your readers need closure!

For the story. I can not weight for the next instalment.

I really like this story. It's been a while since your last entry. Are you ever going to finish the story?? Please do soon!

Where's the rest of the story?

You can't just leave your readers in suspense!!!!

Ben is gonna fuck things up, I hope not to badly though.

WTF???? Why is it that people don't finish anything around here?!

Shit! I think this is the best one I've read yet sans no ending......geez.

I keep coming back to check on this to see if you've updated. I think you've forgotten about this site. I understand that you have school, so it's a little acceptable, but you're leaving me in total heart aching suspense. this story is one of my favorites

This plot is pretty darn good...lots of twists. I'm hoping we'll all get to see what happens in Cali with Ben! Write soon.

Doc Ben is overstepping the boundaries of and I hope that Red doesn't fall for the doc's bedside manner. Please update soon!!

fuck me, this is incomplete -_- finish this pretty please

FUCK MAN.....!!!!! I read all chapters and its fucking INCOMPLETE...seriously you should complete this story...ASAP.....

Really disapppointed by that pseudo cliffhanger: you really spoiled something that was very good at the beginning, but trying to delay the end with stupid "obstacle", and then intorudcing that Ben character as a semmeingly new love interested, by chapter 10 I kind of lost faith in you as serious author. I mean really: what is the point with toying enlessly with that? Why not just end that story with a neat ending? What unecessary drag a cliched triangle story line or pregancy story line when there is NO NEED for that to make the story great? It would only diminished the character to make them regress AGAIN with self-doubt, insecurities and all thos bullshit? Sometimes, all it takes is the courage to end a story, rather than fall pry to vanity and make a disservice to the whole story by salling, delaying etc. Such a shame, really.