All Comments on 'The Predator'

Shades of The Wicker Man about the plot but well told and grimly executed. *pun intended*

Hehe, wow, that was pretty good. The predator becomes the prey. I read another story similar to this, only the female this time was a vampire hehe.

Very creepy and an enjoyable read. But creepy.

But very interesting and creative. I like the justice of it, even though it was twisted. The quotes were the perfect touch.

My favorite part, even though it was all very well done, was the car chase. I almost liked him at that point until I started learning a little more about him! lol.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Bianca

I liked the pace and the drama of the story. It was interesting, well-written with lots of different twists and turns.

Not what I was expecting, Halloween or not, but very well done. "Her nipples jutted out firm, iced cherries on two snowcapped peaks." What a great line. A few editorial slips, but hey, I'm not one to talk and creativity is what it's all about. You have that in spades. Thanks for sharing.

Nothing is too bad for them, to Hell with Life without Parole, etc. Kill them every Halloween or on their birthday, whichever comes first.