by nbaren
A deliciously sexy story about a reluctant guy and devilishly sexy girl. Keep it up!
Take some time to describe the sex. If he goes three strokes and shoots...that's bullshit.
It would be much more interesting if the sex was more detailed and there was some interaction with the characters besides sex.
the CAPS in the STORY seem to TRY to hide THE lack OF details of GOOD content
Is this not every horn dog teenagers fantasy? Wow! Well maybe a few grey headed horndogs have it too just can't act on it like the young ones can.
I think Kelly should have waited until immediately after he earned his money and then shared some of the extra effort with his squirrely sister..