All Comments on '01 - Sex Train To Seattle'

So much more you could do, expand this story, grammer needs a bit of work but very, very good

I would love to see more of these stories, perhaps with some small groups of strangers or random friends

I do, however, think you should include a kind of "leash" on the O'gam agents. Like an implanted taboo against using their abilities to guide committed couples to unfaithfulness, or to force others into sex with the agents. Else, the agents would have far too much power, plus, there's the "squick" factor. Unfortunately, it appears you won't be elaborating on this storyline anytime soon, as it's been since 2010 that you've not updated.

I look forward to more installments, perhaps from the other perspective.