by seth_perm
I think your story really has some great sci fi and erotic elements! Teona is a great character! Boy, did she have a great time sucking those cocks :)
Thanks for a very entertaining new series. I hope this adventure will be long.
Well done!
A very high quality story! I love this series. The only improvement I can think of is to add some more humiliation. And more dialogue during the blowjobs. But overall 5/5. Thanks!
really enjoy your stories, would like to "see" a little more gagging & face fucking while she does those blowjobs
...that I am a little dissapointed that Katryn and Garth were not in the story more. But having said that, It is a good beginning and I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.
I love good erotic comedy and this is just up my street. I hope it continues in the same vein. It is especially good when the stereotypes of genres such as fantasy
get overturned and spilled all over the floor.