All Comments on 'Connor Thomas Ch. 16'

You are back! And damn if I didn't enjoy this chapter. Great work. I want to see how strong he is, when he finally integrates both parts of himself and the effect it has on Viv and Candy. Looking forward to it.

You spin magic with your tale! I got caught up in the first chapter and jusst kept going, marveling at the amazing character buildup, and your way of storytelling.

I won't ask you to hurry - I DO anxiously await more.

~Vargie~

Great chapter like always. I'm not trying to sound like a bitch but a few chapters back you told us we were going to have a long chapter. Where is it? I want more. Don't keep us waiting the story is to good!

What an awesome story! Love your style, so very, very cool.

But I'm not liking this Darius dude though. He's fucking Vivian? Really? So the Alpha is going to share? Really? Hmmm.... LOL

I hate to be one of those whiners, but I want more!!! And soon!

Rev,

All I can say is WOW!

I've read almost all the stories in the nonhuman and sci-fi categories, and NOTHING compares to this story! You are truly gifted! I could and WOULD read and enjoy this story without the sex, but WITH it.. oh WOW.

So, on behalf of ALL your fans.. PLEASE SIR, can we have some more???

again, kudos and, more importantly.. THANK YOU for sharing this tale (and the rest of it??) with all of us!

sincerely,

jc

Liking the story so far up to this point. Killing that 1 Were though just turned this into another "bloodthirsty mut with a boner" story. I love the writing and wanna see where it goes, but from here on i don't think id care if he won or got his ass handed to him anymore. "Me alpha Me kill friendly Weres for fun". Pity their stuck with him as their last hope

So since Connor is now an Alpha werewolf he automatically turns into a raping, murdering, insensitive asshole too?!?! Are we supposed to be happy that he now just ignores the wishes of the women who he decides he's going to "mate" with right then and there, whether they want him to or not. This new rodrique/Connor duality sucks and the character formerly known as Connor now sucks!