All Comments on 'Off to School'

by jojo_banks

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peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
good clean fun

I love the heightened risk of the mother in the shower. good story, well written

Saxon_HartSaxon_Hartover 12 years ago
good job!

I like they way you told this story. I'm torn between wanting more and the fact that you tied yhis up so neatly already.

imharmless69imharmless69over 12 years ago
Fantastic

Love these kind of scenes. Well some.

imharmless69imharmless69over 12 years ago
Well DONE

well done, not well some!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
AMAZING!

I've already read this twice and I want so many more...good job to a great author ;)

NDoradoNDoradoover 12 years ago
Very well written

This is really hot. I hope you write more. And I hope you read my stories too and let me know what you think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing

I thought that was so hot. I love incest and taboo and this is by far one of the best I have ever read. Try to get lauren completely naked so her dad can play with her pussy. Other than that, perfect!

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

Nice way to wake up in the morning...getting a hand job feom his sweet daughter.

ToughSailorToughSailor7 months ago

OK. So far, so good. Need another chapter to get mother involved and to have dad actually screwing daughter. Maybe a three-way? . . . .

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