All Comments on 'Fruitful'

Boring.

Hello,

I just read your story. I have been reading stories on this site for quite some time and I must say that this is definitely a story I would recommend.

Your imagery is rich and your prose is effortless and fluid. I believe you can be a very good writer in this community...

Good Luck!

New twist to the very old story. Sooooo you think that the comrade Lucifer is a romantic, or at least started that way. Ha???? Maybe. Regardless, enjoyed it very much. THANK YOU.

You think that maybe lucifer was the victim. God seems kinds evil. HORRAY FOR LUCIFER. New chapter

I see you are a believer who's flesh and spirit war one with the other.

Always knew there was something

amiss. They must hurry up with that

damn time-machine so you can go

back and re-write the whole thing.

Life as we know it can only turn out

for the better. Shot for a shot at the

possibilities! Hehe.