Let the cuck run back to the wife with his tail between his legs. Thought this would of been better guess not.Same stuff different title.
Is Alan supposed to be the hero in this story? Are we supposed to applaud Alan and laugh our ass off at the husband? Who in this story is the reader supposed to have any sympathy for? Why care about these characters?
The ending spoiled it. Sorry, but I normally really like your stories and most of it showed promise. Never mind, I'll keep reading.
He scores ! A hit, sir , the most palpable kind of hit. Ahh well. It is stories like this one that make me wish I could buy the author a drink to drown his sorrows. Yet he describes the actions of the tresspassing , scheming " lover/ rapist" all too well from multiple perspectives .
I feel as if I'm being read to from the devil's diary. Well either way it's not comfortable reading but it is inspired writing. You've once again provided me with motivation to trudge to the gym so as not to be in the hapless hubby's plight.
You are truly the Lord of Lucid Nightmares ( from husband's POV). Thank you for sharing the pain.
for him its coming and when it hits wham BAM. TK U MLJ LV NV
it has so many ways to closure. TK U MLJ LV NV
Most of the time when I read your stories i feel like I need a long hot shower. This time I don't think it will help. Your stories are written in a realistic manner but I really can't see real people doing the things you describe here. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
Who are u in these tales, the victim or the scoundrel? Either way u write well but there shouldn't be any pussy husbands left in the UK, so finish the story in ar espectable way ... Eventually shit sticks, even to slimeball womanizers.
...England was an admirable country of brave and courageous citizens. Then came post WW2 liberalism and socialism, and England's courage disappeared like its economy. Everyone became, to some extent, a wimp. This story is an example.
The husband is a wimp, the wife is a more and there is some bullshit excuse for what she did. Why would the husband want to know how he seduced her, she a dumb cheating slut.
Every one of your stories is exactly the same. Your a talented writer. Why not change the story lines just a liitle.After awhile all of your chararcters are the same. Whipped hubby,whore wife and a predator who takes advantage. You really do have a talent for writing and I enjoy your style of writing. How about having the husband grow a set some day?
Good, even great, up until the very last line. What the hell is wrong with you!
wow..I am impressed. You kniow what would make this a bit better?
Your fucking death .
Ewwww.... author writes well but he thinks all asshole studs are karate champions and all wives are dumb sluts.Sorry, a guy like that will have a lot of enemies. It will be too much if ou put 'willing cuckold' in our next story?I can skip without read it...
Alll she is is a hairy cunt ment to be fucked! She is not a wife or a woman, just an object!
Allen did nothing to her that she did not want. She has no love or respect for her once husband. Even if he stays she will not find any plearser in him. He will not find any love in her.
- The last sentences were an abuse of the whole story turning the husband into a cuck - didn't fit! Horrible!
- The wife had less brain than a fly. Horrible but understandable else there wouldn't have been a story at all.
- The solution is missing. The only solution would have been for the husband to seperate from his wife. Get his rocks off with somebody else and only after a while, several weeks at least, giving stupid wife time enough to learn how dumb she was, and her begging forgiveness, they might(!) get back together. Else the whole story doesn't make sense at all!
"My heart hurt as if it had been torn in two but I couldn't understand why my penis was so painfully stiff."
Because you're a self-despising homosexual. You have lived out your fantasy vicariously through your wife, and it could only be better if it happened to you. That way, you can have sex with a man, and at the same time punish yourself by being forced to have sex, since you despise yourself for having homosexual desires.
Isn't that closet dark, small, and confining? Come out!! Trust me, no one that knows you will be shocked when you do. They already know how you feel, and they are just being polite after witnessing all the trouble you've gone to in hiding your true self. I am sure they will be nearly as relieved as you are to finally be open and honest about what everyone knows anyway.
You will feel so much better out in the open with the light of truth shining on you.
Now here's someone who waits until the last line to make it a, "Gee, my wife had sex with another man and my dick got hard" story.
Sorry, 1* from me. I kept hoping hubby would break in with a baseball bat but no such luck.
I didn't look at the author before reading - just didn't bother! Shame, had I - I would never have read your tripe! All of your stories are tripe and deal with a guy (not a man) with no balls.
Too bad, you had the makings of a fairly good story - different ending appropriate.
There isn't any way he should have let the bastard get away with what he did. Even if he got his ass kicked it would be worth it, he could have gotten a piece of the bastard, and he should let his wife find her own way back home, and to find out she is kicked to the curb
After all her husband already told her what kind of man Alan was..
it left open the possiblity that Gordon will realize that he loves his wife more than she loves him. Can you imagine if the situation was reversed and Gordon had been seduced by one of Sarah's slutty friends? That marriage would not last a second! However, the odds favor that Gordon will just accept his lot in life to raise his kids and ignore his cheating size queen wife. Alan was totally correct about Sarah and women like her. One problem cuckolds have is keeping the respect of their wives since as perfectly wriiten in this story Sarah concludes why should she bother to clean up prior to Gordon's arrival.
Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold. You UK Gents are quite the wimps!
I love the psychological interaction of this story. Alan, who could only find self worth by intimidating and humiliating others, was the truly pathetic one, while Gordon triumphed by simply walking away and denying Alan of his final high. Bravo.
You are one SERIOUSLY deranged individual. You write well but I give up on trying to find one of your stories that is worth a damn. You must really relish pain and anguish. I feel sorry for anyone who comes in contact with you.
I can see why all of your stories get such low marks.
i do hope your wife is one of these women and brings you a nice suprise a bay or hiv or both.
This was very good indeed. It deserved 5 stars, but because of the anal sex, only 4
Alan has gotten positive reinforcement from the seduction, the sex, and especially from the aftermath of his affairs. He would continue to destroy peoples lives until he was pointedly made aware that his behavior was unacceptable.
His so called friend would be dead a long time ago....
This story really needed another chapter. A conclusion, not a wimp out.
What a utterly ridiculous story. I feel that the author put absolutely NO thought into this whatsoever. It's like you what to believe that people can only punch someone when they've been wronged??? WHAT FUCKING PLANET DO YOU LIVE ON? I don't know anyone who would let this happen except a guy like ukresearcher who is GAY! Nothing wrong with being gay but when you lie to us and tell us you're straight, or worst, and really fucking pathetic, you lie to yourself if you even pretend you're straight. READ YOUR FUCKING POSTINGS uk, if I've ever come across a closet fag it's you! The fact that you, lie about it makes you DISGUSTING!
Very good story.
Spoilt it with the last sentence, though (I couldn't understand why my penis was so painfully stiff.)
Sarah was right in her feelings, it was rape, however Alan knew enough when dishing out mind games on women that soon Sarah would fall or break and she did. I am disappointed in the ending, once the infidelity was disclosed Gordon should have been written with anger, after this is not the first encounter with Alan and it was Deja Vu all over again. Sarah, would and should have been violently angry over the now realized deceit Alan played and the reconfirming thought that she (Sarah) was indeed raped and nothing the law could do about it all because of her follow up actions and conduct. I would see the marriage as crushed and over, however, perhaps a glimmer of hope exists that Sarah would pick herself up and attack Gordon with love and attention, however, deep inside Sarah would harbor deep evil thoughts not of sex but of violent revenge. I do see the real victim as Sarah plotting her revenge thus the end of Alan in a most violent way perhaps shot to death quietly while he slept in his dingy apartment with no witnesses to provide clues. I also believe Gordon would be affected by this anniversary encounter up until the news flashed Alan's death or murder at which time a huge weight would be lifted. Would Gordon and Sarah survive, yes I believe so, her attention to Gordon would never be tested again and her devotion to Gordon would never be interrupted or misguided by another man for as long as they live. I do see them in each others arms perhaps 40 or 50 years ahead, when Sarah confesses she killed Alan as the news stated quietly while he slept simply by breaking into his apartment without anyone witnessing. Gordon would say nothing except hold his beloved wife and continue to smile while gazing into the fire.
1*, because of the end...Why the need to confront the bastard...he would have entered the ferry unnoticed and killed him when he was alone...And never come back to the cheating wife...But no!!!! This deserved an ending from FTDS....
I agree with the latter comment, Alan was no friend of Brad's, in fact, Alan was or can be considered a bully. Brad would have experienced a violent reaction regardless if Alan was taller or stronger. The ending comment about his erection made no sense, after all his wife cheated and the list of lost women in his life due to brad was getting longer. I hope there is a next chapter if that is not your plan, hope someone like FTDS might be considered. What Brad does now would define him as a man and husband. Sarah, although never shown or mentioned, would become angry, I agree with that, this was not some fantasy of Brad's, but rape. I agree I see Sarah very angry to the point where she herself might attempt the life of Alan all because of his sick approach to women and manipulations of those he bullies. Alan is simply a dead man at anyone's hands.
Just simply moronic......
and for our content and story, Great cuck story
because the Biggest asshole on here , dear annony, gave you a 1!!! Hope he chocks on the cum he eats.
who, where and how to cast blame. TK U MLJ LV NV
So how do the wimps get their disrespectful cunt wives pregnant? Story sucked, he didn't need to be able to fist fight the big old guy, but I guess you all would rather suck a dick than fight one. I know better than to read anything with brit or UK in the name, just forgot again.
It is events like this that make a person realise that the homicide of predators should be legalised.
What an unbelievable wimp story. God, I just don't know what you guys see in degrading and humiliating yourselves. I can only think that you are mentally disturbed .
*1 is all you deserve..NO FRIGGIN ENDING!!!
She-it man! What is with People who post stories! They never finish the rest of the story! As this story stands its not looking good (Plse if the ending is posted elsewhere tell us will ya ?) Ok this story has potential to be a good story only if the ending is unique! Love you all! GREG. OH 50 % for half a story .after award 100 % for the place where you based this story It's picture perfect there! BYE
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