by AngelBell
Wow, I've only made 2 comments in the past of other submissions. well written,hot. Gotta give it a 5 !
Very sexy story - I always appreciate sex in public places. I love the way Chad takes charge, and it feels very real the way Ronnie responds. Keep up the good work.
I'm voting 5 as well. By the way, it's quite unusual to find any writer who has four-point-somethings on all their stories--and even rarer to find an author who deserves such high grades.
Wow! An actual writer. What a gem of a story among all the crap here written by people who can't even spell much less form a complete sentence. Other than a typo or two and a couple of awkward sentences, this is one of the best written and most creative stories I've read here. I can't wait to read the rest of your work.
Mrron
This story was so effing hot. Look forward to reading more ;-)
Amebede
never been into exhibitionism (love voyeurism) but this was nice, very hot ... well done.
I don't think I'll ever go to Vegas and look at the city in quite the same way. Very exciting, very well-paced. I look forward to reading more of your work.
This was really well-written, found myself getting lost in the story itself. And it was equally hot and arousing. I say it was a good job, really looking forward to reading more of your work.
The only problem is the unrealistic side of it. If she can only fit a finger then she can't take a penis. good otherwise
The line where Chad says " Don't be shy, Ronnie " sounds remarkably similar to a lonely island song and made me burst out into laughter.
I've had sex, many times, oral and fucking, in front of windows of hotels, high rise apartments and condos, and even offices after hours....many, many times. Try to do it side ways...if anyone is watching...they can see a truly extremely thiiiiick and extremely looooong pole at work...and if the woman is busty...have her up against the glass to start...women all loved it every time. They feel safe, but also anonymous and love the exhibitionist within themselves. Always got all the women excited. Really recommend it...every one should try it.
One for our bucket list. Wife says this cant happen quick enough.
Getting wet thinking of doing it
It was OK but a real turn on for me is breast worship! Not enough in this story! More licking and sucking and playing would of made it so much better!