All Comments on 'On Another World Ch. 10'

I like the way your story is going so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Your story is keeping my interest and that is no easy feat....keep it up

Great so far ... looking forward to the next chapter..

A shark lady named Akula. Very cute.

I started reading this series 3 days ago and just finished, the only thing I did not like is that I caught up with all the chapters... Can't wait for next one!

I just read the entire thing and I want more! This really is a great story. I think that you have just the right amount of sex without overwhelming the story. Write on!

Outstanding story! I cant wait for the next installments. You are a great story teller!

More plz

Please give us more to read - awesome story!

Some new capthers?

Don't leave us hanging

One of the best stories on this site. Please continue!

Before I start reading any series (now) I read the comments on the last chapter... It sooo sucks when you read a series that is dead, never to be finished and then are STUCK beating your head into the wall cuz you will never know the ending.

For all that read this series... as yet unfinished... I hope you are out there (slayer), happy, healthy and writing.

Story truly DEAD?.

It's been over two years.

Hope you finish this some day,,,,,, i love the story.

............... gatow47

PLEASE continue the story do not leave it hanging and continue it . PLEASE !!

Chapter 11 is finally underway. It'll be a while, but it IS coming.

I stumbled across this about three months ago i have read. all that is posted. so far three times already. please Lord DeeEes continue thine tale

I'm glad you decided or are now able to continue with the story. I've enjoyed it and look forward to seeing how it continues and ends.

Fabulous story that just begs to be completed!!! Come on please, get 'er done!!! :)

Looking forward to your next work or art installments.

is there anyway that you can let us know when the next chapter will be out

hope you are still alive DS

As you can tell from many of the comments, we are all waiting for your next installment in our addiction to Reyalsnogard (Dragonslayer spelled backwards).

I can't believe you left us hanging like that...

Loving the story. But can't wait for the next chapter. Don't know how many times I've read it. Hope your working on more material.

Chapter 11 is in the works. I have been away due to various issues...a virus ate up my last computer...then I had health issues that required spinal surgery...now I have a new computer but am unable to type without voice recognition software. I had trouble getting back into the storyline, so I wrote a couple of other stories and now will get back to 'On Another World'

Glad your still with us. Sorry about your bad luck. Happy your working on Chapter 11. How is the Voice Recognition software working out for you?

I just can’t take the old world language haphazardly interjected into the text. It’s slows reading and trips you up as you go causing you to reread sections.

Oh and the story is boring. For an apparent force of one, and being THE ONE, the great saviour of the world he just sucks his winey ass.

Fuck. Kill Kahn and save the world.... so Kahn is right in front of him on a horse. Our guy has 2 cont 1911 automatics. Shoot the horse to immobilise Kahn then shoot Kahn. But nope.

Our guy had a small force and knew Kahn was coming. AMBUSH AMBUSH AMBUSH. Our guy said he wanted gorilla warfare.

The WHOLE job is to kill Kahn.

What a joke.

2 years since you're last post on this site.

6 since you're last chapter on this story.

I hope you are able to finish this story.

As it is a good one.

Also hope all is well with you.

I like the story plot and the concept of story above mindless descriptions of sex.

Cheers

please continue this story it has a good story line to it . I have reread this story twice if not three times and I like it every time I read it . please continue the story please .

Don't stop now. I want to see kann get his ass kicked again

Love the story thus far, can't wait to see how the battle unfolds and the future for DS

See its been years since last post wish he would have finished the story

You have readers still. Finish the story for us please

Hi DS,

Recently found your stories and your comment regarding your health problems. I hope that you are okay? Best wishes and, as with many fans, hoping for more of the another world series.

Kind regards

Folks.. I do believe that ds is no longer writing here.. Perhaps health problems... COVID maybe? Like you;I don't know either.. Great story you had going ds.. wish you the very best sir.. Sorry if your health or that of another took you away from here. But thanks for what did leave us to read.. Best wishes to u

Great story so far can not wait to read what happens next.