All Comments on 'Terror from Above'

Well written vore tale with strong descriptive writing.

Maaaaaaan. This was soooo effing hot. I loved every bit of it! :D Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you ;3

Please write more like this, or hell anything! I love your style and I believe you've got great ability in sharing what you want us to see.

Amazing.

You like 80-90% of the writers on this site and other sites do not finish their stories. Like this story you said Lana would enter a new life, well since you didn't write anymore the reader as no idea what you meantabout Lana's new life. Writers like really piss me off when you leave your readers hanging in the wind like you did with this story. I can only give you 1-Star for the story since you did not finish it where if you had written more and explained Lana's new life I would have given you 5-STARS. Retired Army NCO

It is great story, and honestly I think it could only be improved by a continuation. This is an amazing chapter one, but due to the end, it feels as though it is a bit lacking at tje end, so it is definatly no stand alone. Please... Continue this amazing story.

Part 2 is out on a different site same username

That would be much appreciated

I came reading this - could not make past Lana's first orgasm without coming as well. Looking forward to reading more. VERY HOT!!!