All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 22'

Another good chapter and welcome back..

glad your back i,ve missed you

Welcome Back. Sex Fest or not its good to read something interesting. 5/5

Great to see you back, I missed your writtings. Hope to see more soon!

I am absolutely in love with your story. I cannot wait until the next part. Awesome work!

Waiting semi-patiently for your next installment!!!

This is a fun story, and I hope to see more of it!!!

glad to have you back! can't wait for more!

How can they be Threatened with death if they're cursed with immortality. And 9 millennia is 9000 years not 900

Really loved the series. Please write more.

I hope you write more soon....Like really soon

I have enjoyed this series as well as Jake's Wemen. Please keep up the writings, you are very good.

I am ready for more chapters of the Telepath King please continue on a more frequent basis if you can:-)

Please?

When will melody reappear? Kind of feel like tom forgot of his promise completely, though not say surprising with all thats been going on, still i hope she will pop up soon. Great story, hope you write more in this series

please...pity please...

an amazing storie more please

Finally having finished reading the story, let me say it was one of the longest and best I have read. But it as worth it. It kind of reminded me of a 4th of July fireworks celebration. It starts of slow but teases you so you can't stop looking. It continues with periods of quiet and explosions. Then as you get to the end it seems as if an allout war has happened. This is the first of your stories I have read, but it won't be the last. Five stars are not enough.You are a good author, nay excellent author. I would say Encore! Encore!

I did notice a couple of spots where even a spell check wouldn't work. One that comes to mind is the word you're as opposed to the word your. As in 'I am stealing your money and You're not going to do anything about it' . But the English language is like that.

Would love to read more :D

awesome story bro

much too much too long without! More from you will be appreciated. Any story you feel like writing.

Just read The all The captures cant wait for more

Thank you for your story, I really liked it, and I look forward to more.

One thing; you seem to have trouble with the words Your, and you're.

Your, denotes possession. As in your socks, your shoes, your car, etc.

You're, is a contraction of the words you are.

So when you wrote the sentence '' When you're done with you're shower''

what you really were saying was, '' When you are done with you are shower''

it doesn't make sense.

Mistakes like that interrupt the flow of reading.

Liked every chapter so far, keep it coming.

I hope you are doing better and will be able to resume writing soon. This is 1 of my all time favorite stories and would love to see it continue, or conclude if not.

Please write more

whats the holdup

This is just one of the best stories i've read here. Nice, surprising plot and well described fucking. Please keep on writing.

I wish you would finish the story and not just leave us hanging

Yes please come back and finish both stories!!!!!

Your stories are entertaining but they leave the reader hanging for some sort of conclusion. If you're going to continue to write you need to learn to finish a story.

Cmon you have got to get even with the ex and his so called mate where is that he was going to kill himself surely he must get them back for this so want to read this story lol

I have enjoyed it to the fullest. Please write more the story can’t be over.

I hope you are doing well and that you are still on this site writing. This is an awesome series and needs to continue. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Tazmanusmc

You write a hot scene but there isn’t much in the way of story. Everything is very convenient, there isn’t time for things to develop for the sex scenes to have any weight to them.

Que ce ra. What will be will be. Very enjoyable stroker series. Guess real world got in the way of your further writing here. Still after a decade later I salute your efforts!!

More please, you got us hooked on the characters, what goes on next?

Having just discovered this story, I wanted to say how much I enjoyed it. I'm sorry to read your comments about your life and I sincerely wish that things have improved since you wrote that.

decent story, if somewhat disjointed and unimaginative in parts ... good enough to read to the end ... would be sooo much better to read if the english word usage were corrected ... about a thousand misuses of the word "you're" ... each time the correct term would have been "your" ... the possessive term intended, instead of the meaning "you are"