by Aspire2Provide
This story isn't getting rated as highly as the others in the series -- would welcome comments why it is not liked as much or not written well enough.
Thanks, Aspire2provide
The other ones were all about reluctant non-consent. This one is a sort of solo self exploration and masturbation in the tub. Well done but no feelings of resistance and dread.
Group grope and domination is more fun to read about I guess.
I agree with Mark completely. Well written, but not in the same league as the others.
Personnally, I liked it a lot. After all, this is not a stand alone story, it is part of a series. You are putting Jacey through a process. It is gradual, there's a very interesting build-up and that's why I love it. I hope you will not be disappointed by the scores this story will receive and write many more chapters.
The story will head back to reluctance, etc shortly. :)
Great series. As said before, the self masterbation doesn't follow the previous episodes. Please continue in the earlier trends. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I hope more chapters will follow. I rated this a 5 star as both a stand-alone story and a continuation of the previous "group grope" stories as someone called them. The earlier events at the slumber party have awakened something in Jacey she did not even know was there. There is a lot left in this story. Please keep it going. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
The story is heading back to reluctance shortly. The chapters are briefly covering Jacey's personal sexual awakening scenarios shaping her. The next chapter after #5 will re-involve more reluctance. :)