by feelmore
You will get slammed for this, the Anti-Cuckold flamers will no doubt post their vitriolic comments shortly...
Me? I quite enjoyed it actually.
I suggest you consider a re-write this one!!! The idea has some promise. But not in the current presentation.. Make it real (not 34DD's)... Develope !!!
Somebody doesn't believe in 34DD? My wife has 34 DD's, all natural, and man can she turn a head. And yes, of course anyone that doesn't agree with what you've written - whether you've done it well or not - is going to slam you with a "1". I agree - nice start, and I'll look for part two. (BTW - ending one line with "34DD tits and cute butt" and starting the next with "nice rack and firm ass " is just a little redundant.)
Unlikely! No doubt a 50 year-old woman can be a HotWife, BUT the dress-code is not likely to attract the Bulls she would like to attract. First, those guys are NOT likely to be at the places being talked about! Any 30-35 Bulls there are looking for 18-22 chickies! Change Sweetie's age to 25-30, maybe even 35, and it flies better! the future does NOT look propitious, but let's see!
Agree, Feelmore is begging for the LW anti-cuck trolls to do their 'Ethnic Cleansing auto-1 without reading' flaming crusade. Would fare much better in Mature (if age left as-is) or Erotic Coupling than in LW!
closet cuck credo - every reader here is looking for their jollies, let closet cucks get theirs by flaming
I have 34 DDs... All natural. And I used to be a teacher! I see nothing unrealistic about that...
Ignore the idiots that don't know this is a story....
It's hot and nice keep going
Re: your comment. Only one quibble. Please get (and use) a member name AND include a photo in your profile. (Face shot optional, but nice!) Otherwise your Salient Points are unverified (sorry - but only a bit)
I just LOVE people who don't comment on the story, just that those with opposing opinions aren't allowed to state those opinions. They universally have a fucked up definition of "idiot."
34DD does NOT need a push up bra..other than that no issues
unfortunately, the writing style is like reading a court report of a witness taking the stand. The idea has lots of potential, but it dove in to the slut wife meme very quickly when it could have been developed in an enticing way. The story was way too short as well.
Why would anyone care about a willing cuckold and a whore wife? at least charge for her services and get something from her.