All Comments on 'Forest Pack: Tristan Ch. 05'

Hey, loving the story, but please don't make us wait so long between chapters. Would love to read some more of this story.

Loving this story!!!! Can't wait for the next chapters. Don't make me have to email you again!!!!! lol

that u would ever write again but am quite happy zat u did....keep going on just write quicker......

Good to see the continuation of this story, and I enjoyed this chapter. Hope to see more of this soon.Thanks for sharing with us.

Would like longer chapters... Would like to not wait months for the next one... But very interested to see how this story plays out. Good job.

I realize just how much effort it takes to continue to write. Real life just won’t stop to allow it sometimes. Once again thank you for your time and effort to get his out to us your fans. It was worth the wait.

thanks for finally bringing this chapter out. just hope there wont be a long wait for the next 1.

I hope that the next chapter of this story will be coming soon. I hope Logan get his ares kicked real good. Please let Rhea find the family that she helped!!!

Hope to see another chapter or 2 very soon,please dont leave us hanging!

More please

What a way to meet her mate's family. It will be very good to know the history of Tristan and Logan and why they are no longer 'brothers'. Also it will be good to know why Logan wants the family and also Rhea. I think he only is claiming her as his mate because she wouldn't bend and she was the one who got away. Now the other incentive is that he knows she is Tristan's mate and since he and Tristan are no longer friendly it is a way to get back at him. Very good story and it keeps getting better. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Could you hurry up?Please?!

I love a good story. Just read 1-5 can't wait for more. I can't write for shit but I love to read.

more please i really enjoyed it so far.

This is so good!!!!! More please.

I freaken love this story! Tristan is so cute

Hi, just curious IF there will be any more chapters????

Are you going to make us wait for the next chapter????

Just now finding this story.. Great piece... please continue... :)

Just found and read the series to date. Your writing is impoving by leaps and bounds. please continue ;*)

Have you forgotten this story? Could you maybe possibly update about what's happwning and when the next chapter is coming? Pretty please with a cherry on top.

I hope you continue

Continue this story, it's wonderful : )

Ok, you have gone past AWOL into M.I.A now in my mind. WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?

That song with these words 'Another One Bites The Dust' is coming into my mind with this story now. It's a pity, was enjoying the story a lot.

Another incomplete story?!!!! This is frustrating!!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue.........

This story is great so far, need a new chapter!!

More

Continue the story please.

Please continue

First story iv'e read that has everything you want in a story in it, I mean fear, excitment, humour everything. Please keep writing!!!

hope to see this continued badly!

I know it's been a while since you posted a new chapter, but I'm still hoping for the next part!

The story is great, and I know its been a while. If you're still with us, and reading this, please continue.

PLEASE?!?!?!

Every single story I have read today has been incomplete. What the hell?! Most of them have been abandoned for years. I'm sick of authors who just drop their shit in the middle of a story.

re:

Literotica REALLY needs to let stories be flagged as incomplete

I started a thread asking for this in the site tech support section of the forum.

If you agree with this you could post showing your support, maybe if enough people do then it will be added

Agreed hope more people agree to this. By the way, emogirl13, you should totally finish this. It's so good!!

That can't be it!!!! There's NO way it ends there!!!!! What happens next?????? Please continue the story!!!!

Please write more!!!!!

I know this is a long shot with how old these are but I love this and it would be great to read more