by Trixinabag
Hi there, I am 70 yrs. old, young, what ever. I am reading your story. Tags show drama. Is there going to be more? sqhead
great story, I like the plot. Thank you for the longer chapter. I will be waiting for the next installment
This is getting good.. Let this get a little more juicy.. She is in love with him and he is in love with her too. This will be interesting to see their love and the family grow and who she he be a good asset to the family. Next time can you make the story a little longer. Please give the story a little more back ground. Finding who pack is may be good too. Make the father Aurther see that werewolves and vampires can get along.. I know they will have some trails and hard times but I think it can work
Keep on writing its a god plot. Improve on your spelling and grammar though.
Good story,,,,and would love to have another chapter soon,
Are you planning on continuing with this? I don't know why you wouldn't, because it is kinda good. We've been waiting ages for chapter 4. Come on Trixinabag! Please post the next chapter or at least leave a comment. :)
It all started off so brilliantly. All 3 chapters posted in September 2012. What happened? It all went downhill from there, no updates/comments, nothing. When are we all going to get to enjoy reading chapter 4? Please make it soon.