All Comments on 'Wolf at Heart Ch. 03'

by Trixinabag

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sqheadgermansqheadgermanover 11 years ago
First

Hi there, I am 70 yrs. old, young, what ever. I am reading your story. Tags show drama. Is there going to be more? sqhead

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

i love this story so far. please keep writing.

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76over 11 years ago

great story, I like the plot. Thank you for the longer chapter. I will be waiting for the next installment

jazz1190jazz1190over 11 years ago
Great first three chapters and I cant want to read the next chapter

This is getting good.. Let this get a little more juicy.. She is in love with him and he is in love with her too. This will be interesting to see their love and the family grow and who she he be a good asset to the family. Next time can you make the story a little longer. Please give the story a little more back ground. Finding who pack is may be good too. Make the father Aurther see that werewolves and vampires can get along.. I know they will have some trails and hard times but I think it can work

blebabyblebabyover 11 years ago
Good Story

Keep on writing its a god plot. Improve on your spelling and grammar though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
when?

is the next one coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
chapter 4

When is it coming man?!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Is there another one?????

Good story,,,,and would love to have another chapter soon,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What are you waiting for?

Are you planning on continuing with this? I don't know why you wouldn't, because it is kinda good. We've been waiting ages for chapter 4. Come on Trixinabag! Please post the next chapter or at least leave a comment. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Still waiting!!!

It all started off so brilliantly. All 3 chapters posted in September 2012. What happened? It all went downhill from there, no updates/comments, nothing. When are we all going to get to enjoy reading chapter 4? Please make it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Continue??

........... no more????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS!

Potentially great story it needs to be finished.

BlowPopJBlowPopJabout 2 years ago

Adding a comment so you know that someone in 2022 is reading your story

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