by ElJeffe
It's nice to see a new writer making such a promising start - this was pretty good, as I said above. Thank you, welcome to Literotica and a Happy New Year - I hope we will be seeing much more of your work in 2013. Four stars.
I'm a young female, loved this one - I like the male POV and domination and degrading text. Good writing and to the point - worked for me...
I really like the way the guy checks for willingness on her part and then has his way. please site more.
My wife and I really (!) liked it and played out our own version! What a night - and following afternoon. Nicely done!
So you were pissed off because she was inconsiderate of your time, with no reward but watching her ass move. You attempted to Dom the situation and reap some benefits. She played your game but occasionally took control. At the end of the night, you both won.