Wow hun,that was fucking amazing.You did a very good job.I enjoyed this and it was totally worth the wait
A great conclusion to a thrilling tale. Loved the details and glad that they are finally together and happy. Thanks for sharing.
I absolutely loved this story !!
but dang, how about some punctuation?
That was totally amazing ! You are a rock star baby , total rock star.
Worth the wait!
Great story with a happy ending. I love all your stories. You are a gifted author. Keep writing please. ChristieP
Ive been waiting for this last story. And its been well worth the wait for these last two. Look into getting these published. Maybe add in more so that you can make a novel or two out of this story of yours. Id buy it. In a heartbeat. Keep up the good work. One of the best short stories ive ever read!!
Beautiful story by an amazing writer. Never stop dear.
Monamante, i find myself at a loss for words right now. I have read all 4 chapters and all i can say for now is............. BEAUTIFUL! Rest assured i will return with comments befitting of Santa and Kitty's awesome journey................. Well done, I LOVED IT!
This is a sexy detective story and I just love it. Do continue to write for you have a marvelous talent.
You should make another chapter! Love this series!
sorry i did not understand the ending??
turned a great story weird
Great story! This should be made into a full length movie.
The ending is as best as it can be. Thanks for the story.
Amazing thanks 4 writing a beautiful story!
The grammar was kind of bad in places, and I had difficulty trying to figure out who was talking at times, but the characters were great, the plot was good, and the loving was awesome! thank you for sharing this with us!
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