All Comments on 'Extraordinary'

While his mother was going on and on I pictured Howard's mother (actually her voice)from Big Bang Theory. Your style is zippy enough to really be interesting. Like I said; Good start. Now on to the meat of the story.

idk where the fuk this is goin but, MAN! i was hopin for more. cupl spellin errors tho, lol. good job, hope this aint a once off and u put out more chapters and stories!!! keep it up!

nice start but odd she is out in such transparent outfit.

good start, continue, romantic so far

Great start! The mom is super annoying and immature, so she had him when she was 14, what a whore?! Less about the mom and more about the girl and don't make her dick super huge either! More!

This shit

like where you were going...

Don't stop now.

You appear to have started writing this four years ago and abandoned it.

Think you'll ever finish this?

Yeah dont make her dick huge, make it normal size. Make her futa but not dominant either. The whole submissive guy /turned out guy is gross. Let him get some action. Make a mutual love story or something like that! Awesome start tho, peaked my interest immediately!

I just met my new neighbor for the first time yesterday.But i was fully dressed as a women.He seemed alright with it and asked me over for dinner,And told me it was alright to dress up.I went over for dinner dressed in a short skirt garter belt stockings heels black bra sheer blouse.After dinner we sat in the living room and talked.He grabbed me pushed me to the floor cuffed my hands behind my back gag in my mouth cuffed my ankles together..locked a collar around my neck.He layed me on his bed pulled off my skirt and thong.Next thing i knew his cock was deep in my ass fucking me hard.That night he made me suck his cock and swallow his loads of cum.He keep fucking me all night.The next day i was tied to the bed When he came home he made me suck his cock until hard so he could fuck me some more.

Heyy bro write the next parts of this story please

That's it?

I hope that there is more to come or is it cum? Please don’t leave us hanging. It’s a good start.

SHIT