All Comments on 'Mel's Adventures in BDSM'

by muixenc

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klitorisringklitorisringalmost 11 years ago
Good start

Good start, please continue with Mel's Adventures!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Daddy is a slick one.

He's culling her from the herd before she knows what's what.

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
Another fine story from a new writer!

This was most entertaining, muixenc, and very well-written. I look forward to reading much more of your fine work - thank you for sharing it with us and welcome to Literotica. Five stars and more, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Cross my legs...

An older man just turns me on. Oh how I want to know what happens next ;-) ... It entices you so be prepared to want more.....

kauaiguy1234kauaiguy1234about 6 years ago
Love the dance!

Like the setting and where it appears to be going. Interesting scene with good dialogue and a fun story.

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