by anotherlostlady
Will be interested to see where this goes. Will she find out what happened to the other women he has had? Did he wear them out and have to kill them or did they die? Next installment asap please!
Decent,a bit short,,not a chapter,just a page,and it has a familiar ring to it,,,i guess your getting ideas from reading on here,lets hope yours goes as well as the other one,,,Good Luck,,
I liked it. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I just hope it's longer.
It's a really good story but I noticed once or twice that words where missing in one sentence. Other then that it was really good I can't wait to read more.
Too degrading. Try again. Just because some ignorant assholes didn't see anything worthy in her doesn't mean she doesn't deserve love - passionate LOVE.
Not degrading enough. Liked it anyway. But still not degrading enough.... —_—
Maybe she could have gotten into a bit more trouble and received some really erotic punishment. Just to juice things up some what. All in all, Great Job.