All Comments on 'The Dragon and the Widow'

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willieonewillieoneover 10 years ago
Interesting

Will be interested to see where this goes. Will she find out what happened to the other women he has had? Did he wear them out and have to kill them or did they die? Next installment asap please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Decent,,,

Decent,a bit short,,not a chapter,just a page,and it has a familiar ring to it,,,i guess your getting ideas from reading on here,lets hope yours goes as well as the other one,,,Good Luck,,

sexybrwneyes41sexybrwneyes41over 10 years ago

I liked it. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I just hope it's longer.

Myseason4funMyseason4funover 10 years ago

very good for a first submission...lol submission, :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it!

Looking forward to the next installment. Great 1st time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Error

It's a really good story but I noticed once or twice that words where missing in one sentence. Other then that it was really good I can't wait to read more.

LovesNipplesLovesNipplesover 10 years ago
More.

There has GOT to be a sequel to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great work

gave it 5 stars,

please write a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yuck

Too degrading. Try again. Just because some ignorant assholes didn't see anything worthy in her doesn't mean she doesn't deserve love - passionate LOVE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not enough

Not degrading enough. Liked it anyway. But still not degrading enough.... —_—

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved it

Maybe she could have gotten into a bit more trouble and received some really erotic punishment. Just to juice things up some what. All in all, Great Job.

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