All Comments on 'Silver Moon: A Change Ch. 09'

Is Gianni not the daughter of Julia? In this chapter it seems that Angie is her mother- the same that is mated to Aiden... she had no pups or am I amistaken?

That is what I get for typing and editing the story while drinking... You are right and once completed I am going to go back and edit most of it.

Thank you for this wonderful story.

i cant see a reason or a need to have brought his old pack into this world just to divide the two packs up. especially if he was losing the one he most would have needed(mary) now that mari is gone which i still dont like. so on 1 hand i cant wait to see whi his mate will be(angie), but i am also getting bored with the gain a friend lose that friend 5 minutes later.

This story is getting a little confusing at this point. I don't really understand what is happening or where you are trying to go.

I really enjoy this story but please stop using good so much..good hug,good kiss etc it is the only part of your story that grates on my nerves.

Don't your remember his wolf supressing Pam's scent because his human was not ready for that sort of relationship yet....she is his mate and when his wolf feels he is ready he will let him know she is his. ^_^

Although he has already screwed four women and got two of them up the duff so I think he is pretty well ready to get his mate. LOL

I am actually now getting ready to address it. I think I have said this before but this is actually taking much longer than expected. Well more chapters than expected. I am going to guess two or three more chapters. Once done I am going to essentially revise it to clean up some inconsistencies.

THIS STORY COULD GO ON FOREVER AND I'LL STILL BE READING IT. I FEEL THAT GIANNI SHOULD BE DAN'S MATE WHEN SHE GROWS UP. DAN HAS SOME POTENT SPERM SINCE HE'S CREATING ALL THESE NEW KITS INTO POPULATION.

I am sure any number of us would be more than willing to give it a read through before you post to help avoid little things like the wrong name for Gia's mum. Loved the story and can't wait for the rest.

In the mean time HAPPY HOLIDAYS to you and yours!!!! Hugs and keep up the great work with your awesome writing!

Oh I almost forgot I think his second Alpha is Gia's mate, he did say he would love to have her as his mate when she grows up.

slight confusion

You have changed Gianni's mother from Julie to Angie and Angie was mated to the new guy Aiden so I am confused. You might consider some more editing for the future. Other than that, this is a very good story; nice characters and great plot line if a little confused at times.

You changed Gianni mom from Julia to Angie.. Not good on the proof reading part. Story is still good

Thank you so much for this story. I have been ill for three months and reading has helped greatly.