All Comments on 'Julie in College Ch. 02'

It's loses her virginity, not looses her virginity.

Julie was an idiot. This story was a mess. Get an editor. Write something more compelling that creates some interest in your characters. Because at the end of this, I didn't care whether or not Julie was having sex with a pack of monkeys.

In Chapter 1, Robert was from "a professional family back in Ohio." Now in Chapter 2, at Thanksgiving "Robert flew home to Massachusetts." Where is he really from?

I get it! Robert gets Julie's cherry, has a fuck-buddy for his senior year in college, and graduates. He then leaves Portland and goes back home to ( insert state ) to his REAL girlfriend. You know, the virgin with the big tits, gets married and becomes a successful CPA.

LOL. I've got to read Chapter 3 and see what this author dreams up.