All Comments on 'The Enchanted Rider Ch. 02'

Keep going and do NOT bring anyone else in.

Good Start. You have several possible storylines that can easily open up and give us a great series, if you want to keep writing, or you can kill everyone off by an easy betrayal, to end the set. It is up to you. I personally hope that you keep going... what a great beginning, with such deep characters!

Good story. Obviously Lady C. will make an appearance. I look forward to that.

This could be a great yarn!

So have you run out of ideas, or lost interest?

I really look forward to seeing where this story goes such a good stage with so many possibilities, don't keep us waiting too long.